Reflection -Friday Fictioneers

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All she had to do, was to light the old oil lamp, and the reflection of the glass would bring back unforgettable moments.

That was the time of the day when the shadows of the past started to dance all around her.
The warmth of smiles and the sadness of loss and her in the middle, surrounded by never ending love.
Sitting alone was her therapy after a long day at work.
Soon this house would be filled with all the people she loved, but for now, it was just her and the flickering flame of the old oil lamps.

(Word Count: 100)


It’s Wednesday again, and it’s time for another 100-word challenge. Times seems to fly these days.

The Friday Fictioneers are held by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. Please click >>>here<<< and join the fun. It’s an amazing challenge. Every week I fear that I might not come up with another idea and every week I proof myself wrong.

I do have imagination -who would have thought. 🙂

38 Comments

  1. Lovely thoughts, Bridget. Many of us have memories which bring us warmth. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne

    October 18, 2016
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  2. I enjoyed your take on the prompt. There’s a difference between being lonely and being alone.
    At times, those quiet moments can be like gold. Nicely done …
    Isadora 😎

    October 15, 2016
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    • Sadness and happiness, laughter and tears come hand in hand.

      October 14, 2016
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  3. Unknown's avatar rgayer55 said:

    I loved this. Initially, I suspected something sinister, probably because we read so much of that in flash fiction, but you took the path less traveled. Good for you. I never get tired of reading about pure love.

    October 14, 2016
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    • “I never get tired of reading about pure love,” we have that in common.

      Thank you for your kind words.

      October 14, 2016
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  4. Unknown's avatar gahlearner said:

    Such a peaceful scene. It shows that being alone doesn’t have to be a bad thing.

    October 13, 2016
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  5. Wonderful scene, peaceful and reflective. You captured the essence of those moments of quiet. 🙂

    October 13, 2016
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  6. Unknown's avatar draliman said:

    A lovely and relaxing scene.

    October 13, 2016
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  7. Dear Bridget,

    I relate to this piece well. I enjoy my early morning hours when it’s quite and I can be alone with my thoughts. Well written. Yes, you do have an imagination. 😉

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    October 13, 2016
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    • Thank you Rochelle, I feel the same way. I need my Me-time, it balances my soul.

      October 13, 2016
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  8. Peace!
    Inner peace!! A valuable commodity.

    October 13, 2016
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  9. Unknown's avatar Laurie Bell said:

    There is a peace here. Very well written. A moment to herself

    October 13, 2016
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  10. Unknown's avatar michael1148humphris said:

    A degree of sadness mixed with happy memories. You painted a lovely image.

    October 12, 2016
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  11. Unknown's avatar Iain Kelly said:

    A nice bit of quiet contemplation. I can see the attraction of that. Nice one.

    October 12, 2016
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  12. Unknown's avatar Joy Pixley said:

    Sad, but very peaceful feeling. I like the thought of sitting quietly in the lamp light alone for a while.

    October 12, 2016
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  13. Unknown's avatar Joanne Sisco said:

    What should have been a sad story of loneliness, you managed to make it feel warm because of the narrator’s tone and attitude. Loved it.

    October 12, 2016
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    • There is a difference between being alone and being lonely. I have been alone often, I very selfishly enjoy “Me-time.” I have never been lonely.

      I am glad you loved it.

      October 12, 2016
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      • Unknown's avatar Joanne Sisco said:

        I know what you mean. I have a strong need for alone time and have occasionally felt very lonely in spite of – or perhaps, because of – being surrounded by other people.

        October 12, 2016
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        • Feeling alone in a crowded room, I know what you mean. I just had an experience like that and it gave me the strong sensation of not belonging. I couldn’t wait to leave.

          October 12, 2016
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          • Unknown's avatar Joanne Sisco said:

            That’s exactly it!! … not belonging. What a terrible feeling.

            October 12, 2016
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    • Awwweeeee, you just made my Wednesday a bit brighter.

      October 12, 2016
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