Pedal Fast – Friday Fictioneers

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“Don’t be scared, just drive through and pedal fast,” was the advice I have been given when I was just a little girl.

Back then I was scared of the nearby forest. Only I knew about the monsters; only I was able to see the faces in the trees.

So many years have passed since then and I feel the same way; nothing has changed. This foot tunnel doesn’t look inviting, and once again I start to imagine things.

I can see the light at the end; I don’t have to be afraid.

Still, I will paddle fast–just in case.

(Word Count: 100)


Friday Fictioneers are held by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. It’s a great challenge to make every word count. A 100-word photo challenge is joined by many real talented writers and reading their fictional stories is as much fun as writing.

23 Comments

  1. Unknown's avatar Steph McCoy said:

    Spooky. We have a number of covered bridges in Pittsburgh and a few sort of look like this picture. I got chills reading this – well done!

    November 3, 2016
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  2. Unknown's avatar gahlearner said:

    Yes, what everyone else said. I can feel the old fears creep up just by reading. Well told.

    October 31, 2016
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  3. I agree with Rochelle. So many childhood memories stick when they should be long gone. Nicely captured.

    October 29, 2016
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  4. I like the expression “foot tunnel.” First time hearing that! 🙂👍

    October 28, 2016
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    • Really? Oh dear, did I use a wrong word? I know it as foot tunnel. Hmmm now I have to think about it. Good to see you Jason. 🙂

      October 28, 2016
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  5. Unknown's avatar Joanne Sisco said:

    Nice one, Bridget! It conjures up a lot of reflexive behaviour we all still have … like Elusive Trope said, the basement stairs come to mind!!

    October 28, 2016
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    • Funny how things stick with us, regardless how old we are.

      October 28, 2016
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  6. kind of like me walking (quickly) up the basement stairs…

    October 27, 2016
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  7. Funny how those scary feelings stick to places. 🙂 Is it us or the place?

    October 27, 2016
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    • It’s our mind I suppose. The fears of the childhood never go completely away, they are tucked in a corner of our conscience and come out when (not) needed.

      October 28, 2016
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    • Thank you so much! Welcome to my blog. Nice to meet you!

      October 27, 2016
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      • Unknown's avatar sudershana said:

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        October 27, 2016
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  8. Dear Bridget,

    Some of those childhood fears take root. I’m with her. Pedal faster. Nicely done. .

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    October 27, 2016
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    • Oh, Rochelle, this forest will stay with me forever. Maybe that’s the reason why I am so fast on my bike?

      Have a great day,
      Bridget

      October 27, 2016
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