Friday Fictioneers – Gone too far?

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PHOTO PROMPT © Shaktiki Sharma

Kurt stared outside the window, his nose pressed against the glass. He had spent the last two days on a Greyhound bus, so he could finally meet the person he had fallen in love with.

‘Online friendships are not real,” all his friends at home had warned him.

He didn’t listen, bought the ticket anyway. 

‘What if he is not here?’ 

He felt a knot in his stomach. 

And then he saw him. He was standing there, wet as a drowned rat and he was holding a yellow rose as he said he would. 

That’s as real as it gets. 

(Wordcount: 100)


The Friday Fictioneers are held by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The 100-word photography challenge was a real test this week. I frantically searched for my reading glasses, still couldn’t say for sure what I saw -or not saw. I guess that’s why they call it fiction. 🙂

20 Comments

  1. Unknown's avatar Joanne Sisco said:

    I’m a sucker for a happy ending 🙂

    January 5, 2017
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  2. After reading so many dark stories with this photo prompt, it’s nice to read one with a happy beginning. Hopefully, there will be many, many more yellow roses.
    Happy New Year 2017 🎉 Cheers 🍷
    Isadora 😎

    January 2, 2017
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  3. Unknown's avatar Dale said:

    I am a firm believer in the on-line friendship and/or love. So happy they found each other!

    January 1, 2017
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  4. Unknown's avatar michael1148humphris said:

    I foresee a long term relationship for these two.🙂

    December 31, 2016
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    • Thank you reclining gentleman (cool name) Happy New Year! 🙂

      December 31, 2016
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  5. Unknown's avatar Sandra said:

    Worth the journey, a happy ending.

    December 30, 2016
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  6. Unknown's avatar mjlstories said:

    Good luck to them both – it can be for real!

    December 29, 2016
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  7. What a beautiful, happy ending! So rare, these days.

    December 29, 2016
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  8. Unknown's avatar draliman said:

    Lovely! His faith was justified.

    December 29, 2016
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  9. I think online friendship is for real… it seems to be one of the most common nowadays

    December 29, 2016
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  10. A touching story. Online dating takes some perseverance and you often kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your Prince Charming, but a lot of successful relationships start this way. 🙂

    December 29, 2016
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    • The “frog kissing” happens either way, online and offline. Life is tough. 🙂

      December 29, 2016
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  11. Unknown's avatar Laurie Bell said:

    I too have met many amazing people online. Gotta keep the hope 😎

    December 29, 2016
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  12. Dear Bridget,

    I’ve met some very real friends online…and some who turned out to be not so much. Sweet story.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    December 28, 2016
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