Pink Flesh

A quick cut.
Pink flesh showing
liquids flowing.
He hasn’t noticed it yet.
I have to be fast.

In silence
I need to get it all done
before he wakes up.
There is a smell,
it’s traveling fast
through the house.
I freeze in motion
then I hear noises.
He is running,
coming closer,
he is behind me.
I turn around,
and he grins,
teeth showing,
eyes full of excitement.

It’s watermelon time
How could a dog resist?


14 Comments

  1. Unknown's avatar leigha66 said:

    It just isn’t summer without a little ice cold watermelon on a hot day. Yum!

    July 26, 2024
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  2. Unknown's avatar Jaya said:

    That shook me up!!
    Vader deserves a big slice now, just because you gave so many of us a shock followed by relieved chuckles.

    It’s a terrific piece, by the way. Piece of work – not a piece of 🍉

    You’ve got me babbling now 🤦

    July 24, 2024
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    • I like it when you babble along. It made me smile reading it.
      “Piece of work” was a nice compliment.

      July 24, 2024
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      • Unknown's avatar Jaya said:

        You write extremely well. I am sure I’ve mentioned this earlier – I used to wait for your next post, specially your account of how you lost all and how you made it UP again. Waiting for your book now 😀

        July 25, 2024
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  3. Wonderful. He is not alone! What is it with dogs and watermelon?

    July 23, 2024
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    • We never had a watermelon-dog before. It’s so wonderful too watch. Our Vader is very entertaining.

      July 23, 2024
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  4. Nice plot twist with an adorable reaction by your four-legged watermelon hound. 🙂

    July 23, 2024
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  5. Unknown's avatar Michele Lee said:

    Don’t worry me like that! 😅

    July 23, 2024
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  6. Unknown's avatar kagould17 said:

    Ooooh, you had me going Bridget. Good one. Watermelon time is a good time, even for pooches. Happy Tuesday. Allan

    July 23, 2024
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    • I wrote itself. I really have to sneak to the fridge to get some watermelon because if Vader smells it, or hears it, he gets so excited.
      I sew in my workroom in the house, but have the ‘big’ workroom set up in our former detached garage, in the back of our yard. I can’t make it through the yard without him bouncing full of joy when he smells his favorite treat. I need to film him.

      Our other dog doesn’t understand it at all. She tried a few pieces and thought it was gross.

      July 23, 2024
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    • You should see Vader, it’s comical. He can sniff watermelon from across the house. He is a water melon addict. 🙂

      July 23, 2024
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