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I am so glad they showed me this shortcut; it’s so much faster. I am already late; dinner will be served soon. My hotel is just around the corner. I will take a shower, dress up and will storm the buffet, like all the other tourists. 

I just wish all these Greek houses wouldn’t look alike. I love to glance at them from the beach, but right now I am hoping to see some color that could guide me.

Almost there, “Nope, that isn’t it.

I am lost, will have to turn around. I will be late for dinner -again.

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The 100-word Friday Fictioneers is hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. I joined this beautiful challenge last week and had a ball. Step on the magical online carpet >>>here<<< and check it out.

It’s fun. Thank you~!

 

26 Comments

  1. Unknown's avatar joannesisco said:

    Nice one! I don’t think turning around at this point is going to help though. Once stuck in the maze … 😉

    July 13, 2016
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    • I can’t tell you how often I had to turn around, because the shortcut didn’t work out. The alleys in Greece and Italy are very confusing.

      July 13, 2016
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      • Unknown's avatar joannesisco said:

        hahahaha!! I wondered if this was a story anchored in fact. I was right!! 😀

        July 13, 2016
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  2. I sympathize. Getting lost is a terrible feeling. It would be especially bad when you know you’ll be late for a meal. Good writing, NSL. 🙂 — Suzanne

    July 13, 2016
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  3. I love Greece but haven’t been in years. Lucky you for being there!

    July 10, 2016
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    • I was born in Europe. Greece was just around the corner (like everything else),.

      July 10, 2016
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  4. Unknown's avatar gahlearner said:

    Oh dear, I hope something is left when she finally arrives. These alleys often do look the same.

    July 9, 2016
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  5. Dear Happy Quitter,

    I guess you could call this story a misdirection. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

    July 8, 2016
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  6. Unknown's avatar Sandra said:

    I wouldn’t count on there being much left on the buffet table…

    July 8, 2016
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  7. Unknown's avatar draliman said:

    Isn’t that often the way with “shortcuts”?

    July 7, 2016
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  8. Enjoyed that. I loved the certainty that faded and the concentration on dinner!

    July 7, 2016
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    • Thank you Hilary. It is always good to see you. I like this 100 word challenge. I never thought I could do it.

      July 7, 2016
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  9. Nice one. It does look like you might be stuck in a maze!

    July 6, 2016
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    • Many cities in Europe have small alleys like that. I remember Naples, Italy so well. I could touch both sides when I stretched my hands out.

      July 6, 2016
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      • Cool. I like those places that feel caught in history. 🙂

        July 7, 2016
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